Class Webpage http://hal.ucr.edu/~cathy/f99-4508.html
Teacher: Cathy
Decker
Office: LA-7D
Phone: 909-941-2412
Mailbox: LA-10
Office Hours: Mon. and
Wed. 9:30-11 am
ALSO Mon. 2-3 pm
Tues.
and Thurs. 10-10:30 am
(No office hours Thurs. 11/11)
Email
(home): cathy@languagemachines.com
Email
(UCR office): cathy@hal.ucr.edu
FAX: 909-941-2632 (Chaffey)
Dear Students,
Hi! Welcome to English 450, Fundamentals of Composition! In this class we focus on what makes a great paragraph. I believe a good paragraph has an insightful, clear topic sentence; a sufficient amount of vivid, concrete, and relevant supporting detail; a clear, logical order; grammatical and mechanical excellence; and style, tone, and diction that are appropriate to the topic and audience. We will work on understanding, producing, and evaluating good writing.
We will be using a graph to measure our achievement of our goals. This graph, called a capacity matrix, will also be used to calculate grades. Because this is an unconventional educational system, it is important that you monitor yourself to make sure you understand how the class works, how the matrix is used to grade assignments, and how you are progressing towards your final grade. Be sure to tell me in person, by phone, by email, or by fax if you need help with these key concepts or any of the we are trying to master.
With best wishes for a good semester,
Cathy Decker, Ph.D.
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Course Objectives
Upon completion of this course, the student will be
able to do the following.
1. Gain an appreciation of the aesthetic and literary characteristics of good writing. (Our capacity matrix breaks this down into eight capacities or skills.)
2. Develop the ability to think logically and express thoughts in clear, effective prose. (This breaks down into eighteen capacities or skills.)
3. Explain and be better able to apply the principles underlying the creation of unified and coherent paragraphs. (See note after objective eight.)
4. Recognize and formulate clear and specific topic sentences and develop these into unified and complete paragraphs. (See note after objective eight.)
5. Analyze the structure of various kinds of paragraph development, including exposition and argumentation, and construct paragraphs in such patterns. (See note after objective six.)
6. Demonstrate an understanding of the various logical relationships of ideas within a paragraph and apply these in their own writings. (A combination of objectives five and six breaks down into twenty different capacities or skills.)
7. Study their own grammatical and punctuation errors to make their writing more effective. (This goal breaks down into fifty different capacities or skills.)
8. Study and practice the coherency and rhetorical devices that make a paragraph rational, clear, and aesthetically sound. (The overlapping objectives three, four, and eight together break down into thirty-four capacities or skills.)
Chaffey's 450 Writing Requirement
A minimum of 1800 words
will be required of each student in the course.
The Grade Formula
| Prose Writing Assignments Average | 65% |
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What Are Participation Points?
During our first class we will determine what we will give participation points for. When this policy is finalized, I will give a copy to each class member. Basically I will keep a running tab of the maximum number of points a person can get. Because the maximum will be indicative of giving 110%, that number will equal 110% (11 points out of a possible of ten)! I will then calculate what number of participation points earns a 100%. What percent of these points that you have is your participation-point grade. Feel free to email me or come to office hours to clarify this!
We will give participation points for the following things.
1. Being ready to go at 8 AM. (to get point you must check in)
2. Doing something helpful for the class.
3. Doing anything that causes someone to nominate you for a point.
4. Winning any game or exercise we hold in class.
5. Sharing resources.
6. Staying for the entire class. (to get point you must check out)
7. Attending college book events.
As a class, we resolve that we will follow this code of behavior.
1. We will abide by the food and drink policy.
2. We will respect each other and treat others the way we want to be treated.
3. We will listen and not interrupt each other.
4. We will be patient.
5. We will help each other.
6. We will share resources.
7. We will talk loudly so everyone can hear us.
8. We will tell people if we can hear them or can't understand what they are saying.
9. We will be on time.
Required Supplies
Good Things We Want in This Class . . .
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Things that I Avoid and that I’d Like the Class
to Avoid . . .
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Chart to Track the Class Schedule
As the class determines assignments and due dates,
we will fill in this chart.
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Methods |
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English Skills pages 477-481 |
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English Skills, pp. 18-38 |
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Peer-Review of Paragraphs |
English Skills pp. 1-49 |
Bring a paragraph written in the format described in your textbook. Bring two copies of the paragraph (or an IBM-formatted version of the paragraph, so you can print it out or email it to two peer reviewers) English Skills pp. 38-49 |
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Portfolio Preparation |
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Bring your capacity matrix, portfolio, and porfolio material to class (your paragraphs, peer review sheets, revisions, and textbook exercises). |
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English Skills pages 50-74 |
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Peer Review Exercise |
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Draft of Paragraph on The Bean Trees |
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Peer Review Exercise |
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Revise your Bean Tree paragraph as suggested by peer review. Do exercises page 75-80 in textbook.
Quiz on Unity |
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Quiz on Chapter Six of The Bean Trees Catch up on textbook exercises to page 80. (In class I said page 74 by mistake; we will go over pages 74-80 for those who are behind.) |
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English Skills have textbook exercises finished up to pages 85. (Note that the directions on page 82 say choose Assignment 1, 2, or 3--do 1 of the 3 not all 3 unless you are very motivated! |
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Support/The Matrix |
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Work on portfolio |
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Support and Coherence |
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Portfolio Work |
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Coherence and Sentence Skills |
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Assignment #2 Due--homework on Transitions and Patterns of Organization |
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Coherence |
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Finish textbook exercises pages 112-130 |
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Focus on The Bean Trees |
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Get caught up on all work. Portfolio Check #2 (include textbook exercises up to page 85, revisions of previous essays, and any revisions to raise grades of exercises or quizzes) |
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Sentence Skills |
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Do textbook exercises p. 241-5; check your answers in the back of the book; then do Part II, the corrections. |
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Subjects and Verbs, Fragments |
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Do exercises p. 251, pp. 258-260 |
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Subject and Verbs, Fragments |
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Do exercises pp. 263-71. |
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Effective Word Choice, Run-Ons |
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Do exercises pp.n 283-6 and pp. 435-6 |
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Pronoun Agreement, Reference, and Point of View |
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Do exercises pp. 318-22 and revise your paragraph on what I did this weekend to be a narrative (see the textbook chapter "Narrating an Event" page 201-7 |
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Review of Subject and Verbs, Fragments, and Run-Ons Portfolio work |
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Revise work in your portfolio that isn't passing. Fill out a portfolio form for every paper, quiz, homework handout, or set of textbook exercises. You should have (1) a cause paper on a job, (2) an example paper on a pushover instructor, (3) a process paper on how to support a parent in school, (4) a narrative on what you did on Halloween weekend, (5) a paper on one of the three topics pages 82-4, and (6) a paper on The Bean Trees. Make sure each paragraph has a portfolio sheet. Determine which type of paragraphs you haven't written and start working on those (Effect, Division, Classification, Contrast, Comparision, Description, etc.) You can use your prewriting exercises from the textbook to inspire your other paragraphs (describe your house, classify your everyday stresses, etc.) |
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Work on New Paper on Different Method of Development Subject-Verb Agreement, Commonly Confused Words |
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Work on your portfolio. Work on Sentence Skills sections, which run from pages 247 to 454, doing sections on the skills problems that you identified in your diagnostic test (pages 241-6). |
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Movie on Barbara Kingsolver | Catch up on your Bean Trees reading. | Do textbook pages 304-310 and pages 417-428. |
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More on Subject-Verb Agreement and Commonly Confused Words
Defintion |
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Do exercise p. 179; select a topic to write a definition paper on from pages 179-183 and do a list, bubble diagram, or freewrite on this topic. |
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Definition Paper Peer Review
Dangling Modifiers, Misplaced Modifiers, Faulty Parallelism |
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Do review tests pp. 336-7, 342, 345-6. |
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Portfolio Assembly and Forms
What Sentence Skills do My Essays Prove I Know? |
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Portfolio Check*** This is the check were I tell you what you need to do to pass the class, so it is really, really important if you want to pass the class. |
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What Haven't I Proven in My Portfolio? Capital Letters | Review the entire novel for exam prep. | Do exercises pages 352-361. Work on the grammar exercises you need to prove mastery of all the sentence skills on the portfolio. |
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Final Portfolio Check | ||
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