English 450

Section #836
Tues. and Thurs., 8:00-9:15 am
LA-14

Class Webpage http://hal.ucr.edu/~cathy/f99-4508.html

Teacher: Cathy Decker
Office: LA-7D
Phone: 909-941-2412
Mailbox: LA-10
Office Hours:  Mon. and Wed. 9:30-11 am
ALSO Mon. 2-3 pm
     Tues. and Thurs. 10-10:30 am
(No office hours Thurs. 11/11)
Email (home): cathy@languagemachines.com
Email (UCR office): cathy@hal.ucr.edu
FAX: 909-941-2632 (Chaffey)

FAX: 909-787-3985 (My UCR office--send to Dr. Decker c/o Dr. Burgess)

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Dear Students,

Hi! Welcome to English 450, Fundamentals of Composition! In this class we focus on what makes a great paragraph. I believe a good paragraph has an insightful, clear topic sentence; a sufficient amount of vivid, concrete, and relevant supporting detail; a clear, logical order; grammatical and mechanical excellence; and style, tone, and diction that are appropriate to the topic and audience. We will work on understanding, producing, and evaluating good writing.

We will be using a graph to measure our achievement of our goals. This graph, called a capacity matrix, will also be used to calculate grades.  Because this is an unconventional educational system, it is important that you monitor yourself to make sure you understand how the class works, how the matrix is used to grade assignments, and how you are progressing towards your final grade. Be sure to tell me in person, by phone, by email, or by fax if you need help with these key concepts or any of the we are trying to master.

With best wishes for a good semester,
Cathy Decker, Ph.D.
 
 

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Course Objectives
Upon completion of this course, the student will be able to do the following.

1. Gain an appreciation of the aesthetic and literary characteristics of good writing. (Our capacity matrix breaks this down into eight capacities or skills.)

2. Develop the ability to think logically and express thoughts in clear, effective prose. (This breaks down into eighteen capacities or skills.)

3. Explain and be better able to apply the principles underlying the creation of unified and coherent paragraphs. (See note after objective eight.)

4. Recognize and formulate clear and specific topic sentences and develop these into unified and complete paragraphs. (See note after objective eight.)

5. Analyze the structure of various kinds of paragraph development, including exposition and argumentation, and construct paragraphs in such patterns. (See note after objective six.)

6. Demonstrate an understanding of the various logical relationships of ideas within a paragraph and apply these in their own writings. (A combination of objectives five and six breaks down into twenty different capacities or skills.)

7. Study their own grammatical and punctuation errors to make their writing more effective.  (This goal breaks down into fifty different capacities or skills.)

8. Study and practice the coherency and rhetorical devices that make a paragraph rational, clear, and aesthetically sound. (The overlapping objectives three, four, and eight together break down into thirty-four capacities or skills.)

Chaffey's 450 Writing Requirement
A minimum of 1800 words will be required of each student in the course.

The Grade Formula

Prose Writing Assignments Average 65%
Other Assignments Average
20%
Participation Points
10%
Final Exam
5%
TOTAL
100%

What Are Participation Points?

During our first class we will determine what we will give participation points for. When this policy is finalized, I will give a copy to each class member.  Basically I will keep a running tab of the maximum number of points a person can get.  Because the maximum will be indicative of giving 110%, that number will equal 110% (11 points out of a possible of ten)!  I will then calculate what number of participation points earns a 100%.  What percent of these points that you have is your participation-point grade.  Feel free to email  me or come to office hours to clarify this!

Participation Point Policy

We will give participation points for the following things.

1. Being ready to go at 8 AM. (to get point you must check in)

2. Doing something helpful for the class.

3. Doing anything that causes someone to nominate you for a point.

4. Winning any game or exercise we hold in class.

5. Sharing resources.

6. Staying for the entire class. (to get point you must check out)

7. Attending college book events.

Our Code of Cooperation

As a class, we resolve that we will follow this code of behavior.

1. We will abide by the food and drink policy.

2. We will respect each other and treat others the way we want to be treated.

3. We will listen and not interrupt each other.

4. We will be patient.

5. We will help each other.

6. We will share resources.

7. We will talk loudly so everyone can hear us.

8. We will tell people if we can hear them or can't understand what they are saying.

9. We will be on time.

Required Supplies

Policies


Good Things We Want in This Class . . .
 

  • Planning Ahead
  • Supporting Others
  • Rewarding Excellence
  • Cooperativeness
  • Politeness
  • Promptness
  • Good Listening
  • Assertive Approaches to Problems and Problem Solving
  • Effective Working with Others
  • Drinking Water Without Destroying Equipment
  • Things that I Avoid and that I’d Like the Class to Avoid . . .
     

  • Silent Anxiety
  • Not Asking Questions When You are     Worried or Confused
  • Badgering or Brutally Questioning Others
  • Leaving Others Out in the Cold
  • Hostility
  • Finger Pointing
  • Noisy Cell Phones and Pagers
  • Playing Computer Games
  • Breaking the Food/Drink Policy
  • Chart to Track the Class Schedule
    As the class determines assignments and due dates, we will fill in this chart.

    Date 
    Class Topic
    Reading Assignments
    Other Homework
    8/24
    Class Policies/
    Methods
    N/A
    NA
    8/26 
    Good Writing/Assignment Design
     Bean Trees Chap. 1
    English Skills pages 477-481
    English Skills pages 1-18
    8/31 
    Evaluating Writing/Assignment Design
    Bean Trees Chap. 1
    English Skills, pp. 18-38
    9/2 
    Audience/Paragraph Development
    Peer-Review of Paragraphs
    Bean Trees Chap. 2
    English Skills pp. 1-49
    Bring a paragraph written in the format described in your textbook. Bring two copies of the paragraph (or an IBM-formatted version of the paragraph, so you can print it out or email it to two peer reviewers)
    English Skills pp. 38-49
    9/7 
    The Writing Process

    Portfolio Preparation

    Bean Trees Chap. 3
    Bring your capacity matrix, portfolio, and porfolio material to class (your paragraphs, peer review sheets, revisions, and textbook exercises).
    9/9 
    Topic Sentence/Assignment Design
    Bean Trees Chap. 3
    Assignment #1 Due/Portfolio Check
    9/14 
    Unity 
    Bean Trees Chap. 4
    English Skills pages 50-74
    9/16 
    Support

    Peer Review Exercise

    Bean Trees Chap. 5
    Draft of Paragraph on The Bean Trees
    9/21 
    Coherence

    Peer Review Exercise

    Bean Trees Chap. 6
    Revise your Bean Tree paragraph as suggested by peer review. Do exercises page 75-80 in textbook.

    Quiz on Unity

    9/23 
    Support
    Bean Trees Chap. 6
    Quiz on Chapter Six of The Bean Trees Catch up on textbook exercises to page 80. (In class I said page 74 by mistake; we will go over pages 74-80 for those who are behind.)
    9/28 
    Coherence
    Bean Trees Chap. 7
    English Skills have textbook exercises finished up to pages 85. (Note that the directions on page 82 say choose Assignment 1, 2, or 3--do 1 of the 3 not all 3 unless you are very motivated!
    9/30 
    Support/The Matrix
    Bean Trees Chap. 7
    Work on portfolio
    10/5
    Support and Coherence
    Bean Trees Chap. 8
    Portfolio Work
    10/7
    Coherence and Sentence Skills
    Bean Trees Chap. 8
    Assignment  #2 Due--homework on Transitions and Patterns of Organization
    10/12
    Coherence
    Bean Trees Chap. 9
    Finish textbook exercises pages 112-130
    10/14
    Focus on The Bean Trees
    Bean Trees Chap. 10
    Get caught up on all work. Portfolio Check #2 (include textbook exercises up to page 85, revisions of previous essays, and any revisions to raise grades of exercises or quizzes)
    10/19
    Sentence Skills
    Bean Trees Chap. 11
    Do textbook exercises p. 241-5; check your answers in the back of the book; then do Part II, the corrections.
    10/21
    Subjects and Verbs, Fragments
    Bean Trees Chap. 12
    Do exercises p. 251, pp. 258-260
    10/26
    Subject and Verbs, Fragments
    Bean Trees Chap. 13
    Do exercises pp. 263-71.
    10/28
    Effective Word Choice, Run-Ons
    Bean Trees Chap. 13
    Do exercises pp.n 283-6 and pp. 435-6
    11/2
    Pronoun Agreement, Reference, and Point of View
    Bean Trees Chap. 14
    Do exercises pp. 318-22 and revise your paragraph on what I did this weekend to be a narrative (see the textbook chapter "Narrating an Event" page 201-7
    11/4
    Review of Subject and Verbs, Fragments, and Run-Ons
    Portfolio work
    Bean Trees Chap. 14
    Revise work in your portfolio that isn't passing. Fill out a portfolio form for every paper, quiz, homework handout, or set of textbook exercises. You should have (1) a cause paper on a job, (2) an example paper on a pushover instructor, (3) a process paper on how to support a parent in school, (4) a narrative on what you did on Halloween weekend, (5) a paper on one of the three topics pages 82-4, and (6) a paper on The Bean Trees. Make sure each paragraph has a portfolio sheet. Determine which type of paragraphs you haven't written and start working on those (Effect, Division, Classification, Contrast, Comparision, Description, etc.) You can use your prewriting exercises from the textbook to inspire your other paragraphs (describe your house, classify your everyday stresses, etc.)
    11/9

    Work on New Paper on Different Method of Development Subject-Verb Agreement, Commonly Confused Words

    Bean Trees Chap. 15
    Work on your portfolio. Work on Sentence Skills sections, which run from pages 247 to 454, doing sections on the skills problems that you identified in your diagnostic test (pages 241-6).
    11/11
    Movie on Barbara Kingsolver Catch up on your Bean Trees reading. Do textbook pages 304-310 and pages 417-428.
    11/16
    More on Subject-Verb Agreement and Commonly Confused Words
    Defintion
    Bean Trees Chap. 16
    Do exercise p. 179; select a topic to write a definition paper on from pages 179-183 and do a list, bubble diagram, or freewrite on this topic.
    11/18
    Definition Paper Peer Review

    Dangling Modifiers, Misplaced Modifiers, Faulty Parallelism

    Bean Trees Chap. 17
    Do review tests pp. 336-7, 342, 345-6.
    11/23
    Portfolio Assembly and Forms
    What Sentence Skills do My Essays Prove I Know?
    Bean Trees Chap. 17
    Portfolio Check*** This is the check were I tell you what you need to do to pass the class, so it is really, really important if you want to pass the class.
    11/25 
    HOLIDAY! 
    Happy Thanksgiving!
     
    11/30
    What Haven't I Proven in My Portfolio? Capital Letters Review the entire novel for exam prep. Do exercises pages 352-361. Work on the grammar exercises you need to prove mastery of all the sentence skills on the portfolio.
    12/2
         
    12/7
         
    12/9 
        Final Portfolio Check
    12/14 
    Final Exam
    Exam Time: 8-10:30 a. m.
     

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