English 450

Section #02923
Tues. and Thurs., 11:00-12:30 a.m.
VSS-101

Class Webpage http://hal.ucr.edu/~cathy/s00-450.html

Teacher: Cathy Decker
Office: LA-7C
Phone: 909-941-2412
Mailbox: LA-10
Office Hours:  Mon. and Thurs. 1:45-2:45; Mon. 12-12:30; Wed. 4:30-5:00
Email: cathy@citrus.ucr.edu
FAX: 909-941-2632 (general Chaffey fax, specify Dr. Decker, English Department)

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Dear Students,

Hi! Welcome to English 450, Fundamentals of Composition! In this class we focus on what makes a great paragraph. I believe a good paragraph has an insightful, clear topic sentence; a sufficient amount of vivid, concrete, and relevant supporting detail; a clear, logical order; grammatical and mechanical excellence; and style, tone, and diction that are appropriate to the topic and audience. We will work on understanding, producing, and evaluating good writing. Be sure to tell me in person, by phone, by email, or by fax if you need help with these key concepts or any of the we are trying to master.

The key to success in this class is to read the books and do the work in and out of class. That sounds pretty obvious, but I've noticed again and again that some students don't read the textbooks and don't do work. These same students expect that they will be able to get by as they likely did in high school. Sadly, eleven years of teaching experience has taught me that most students who fail could pass but simply didn't use common sense--they didn't attend class, turn in the required work, or read and study the textbooks. Occasionally a student gives a class their best effort and can't pass, but I've always found the student enrolled in the class when they should have taken a lower-level course--he or she simply didn't have enough of the basic skills required to do well in the course. Taking a placement test or consulting an academic advisor could have prevented this bad experience.

Successful students, I've noticed over the years, are students who are persistent, consistent, and "study smart." If you persist in going to the class and doing the required work consistently, you often can stand out in the classroom as a model student. This seems a pretty minimal level of work to be a model student, but amazingly many students can't be consistent or persistent! To be "study smart" means to me to understand that what you put in most cases will relate to what you get back. If you can't tell someone what you've read after reading it, you will do badly when tested on the material or doing an assignment that requires you to apply that material. If you do your homework hastily and don't double check it, you will get a poor grade. If you sit down and write a paragraph straight through and then turn it in without revision or proofreading, you will probably get a failing grade. In short, using common sense will tell you how to succeed in this class!

With best wishes for a productive, healthy semester,
Cathy Decker, Ph.D.
 
 

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Course Objectives
Upon completion of this course, the student will be able to do the following.

1. Gain an appreciation of the aesthetic and literary characteristics of good writing.

2. Develop the ability to think logically and express thoughts in clear, effective prose.

3. Explain and be better able to apply the principles underlying the creation of unified and coherent paragraphs.

4. Recognize and formulate clear and specific topic sentences and develop these into unified and complete paragraphs.

5. Analyze the structure of various kinds of paragraph development, including exposition and argumentation, and construct paragraphs in such patterns.

6. Demonstrate an understanding of the various logical relationships of ideas within a paragraph and apply these in their own writings.

7. Study their own grammatical and punctuation errors to make their writing more effective. 

8. Study and practice the coherency and rhetorical devices that make a paragraph rational, clear, and aesthetically sound.

Chaffey's 450 Writing Requirement
A minimum of 1800 written words will be required of each student in the course.

The Grade Formula

Prose Writing Assignments Average 65%
Other Assignments Average
20%
Participation Points
10%
Final Exam
5%
TOTAL
100%

What Are Participation Points?

During our first class we will determine what we will give participation points for. I have already specified a few basic things that will receive points below. When this policy is finalized, I will give a copy to each class member. Basically I will keep a running tab of the maximum number of points a person can get. Because the maximum will be indicative of giving 110%, that number will equal 110% (11 points out of a possible of ten)! I will then calculate what number of participation points earns a 100%. What percent of these points that you have is your participation-point grade. Feel free to email me or come to office hours to clarify this!

Participation Points

We will give participation points for the following.

1. Arriving at 11 a.m. ready to go

2. Attending college book events

Our Code of Cooperation

As a class, we agree to treat each other in the following way. (We will develop this in the class.)

Required Supplies

Policies


Good Things We Want in This Class . . .
 

  • Planning Ahead
  • Supporting Others
  • Rewarding Excellence
  • Cooperativeness
  • Politeness
  • Promptness
  • Good Listening
  • Assertive Approaches to Problems and Problem Solving
  • Effective Working with Others
  • Drinking Water Without Destroying Stuff
  • Things that I Avoid and that I'd Like the Class to Avoid . . .
     

  • Silent Anxiety
  • Not Asking Questions When You are Worried or Confused
  • Badgering or Brutally Questioning Others
  • Leaving Others Out in the Cold
  • Hostility
  • Finger Pointing
  • Noisy Cell Phones and Pagers
  • Reading the Paper or for Other Classes
  • Breaking the Food/Drink Policy
  • Chart to Track the Class Schedule
    As the class determines assignments and due dates, we will fill in this chart.

    Date
    Class Topic
    Reading Assignments to be Done by Now
    Other Homework Due Now
    1/11
    Class Business
    NA
    NA
    1/13
    Placement test research
    NA
    NA
    1/18
    Reading
    Proofreading
    Identifying Skills
    Bean Trees Chap. 1
    English Skills pages 477-481
    Turn in double-spaced answers to the following questions. Make sure each answer consists of several complete sentences, not phrases or lists. Phrases or lists will only be able to get 1/2 credit at most.
    1. Why does Missy change her name to Taylor?
    2. What are three good reasons Taylor should leave Kentucky?
    3. What are three differences between Taylor and Joline?
    4. What are three good reasons Taylor should not keep the Indian baby?
    5. What are three good reasons Taylor should keep the Indian baby?
    1/20
    Time Order and Emphatic Order
    Transistions
    Outlining
    English Skills pages 86-91
    On a piece of looseleaf, write the eight answers that fill in the blanks correctly on pages 87-8; then write the eighteen words that are the answers to the activity on pages 90-91.
    1/25
    Study Skills
    Process Analysis
    Prewriting
    English Skills pages 560-566
    On looseleaf, write the letters of the correct answers of the reading comprehension questions pages 567-8; full sentence-length answers to the four content questions, page 568; and phrase answers to the three structure questions, page 568. Write a two to five-sentence answer to the style and tone question on page 569.
    1/27
    Understanding Fiction
    Revising Drafts for Unity and Coherence
    Bean Trees Chap. 2
    Assignment One

    Turn in double-spaced answers to the following questions. Make sure each answer consists of several complete sentences, not phrases or lists. Phrases or lists will only be able to get 1/2 credit at most.
    1. How does Angel's accident change the lives of Lou Ann and Angel?
    2. What are three differences between Taylor and Lou Ann?
    3. Why does Lee Sing think girls are inferior to boys?
    4. Lee Sing's phrase is made the title of the chapter, indicating the author thinks it is important. Does the world of the chapter indicate that women have a harder time than men? Give three reasons to support your answer.
    5. What are three differences between Lou Ann's neighborhood and where Taylor grew up?

    Assignment Two

    Bring in a draft of your process analysis paper. The draft should have a topic sentence, clear stages of the process and supporting details, and a concluding sentence.

    2/1
    Revising for Support
    English Skills pages 35-59

    Assignment One

    On a piece of looseleaf, list the seventeen words or phrases that fill in the blanks on pages 39-44. Then list the five numbers that are the correct answers to Activity 2, pages 45-6. Next, look over the entire chapter and then list the twenty-five words or phrases that make the chapter summary on pages 47 to 49 complete on your looseleaf. Finally, write the four phrases that answer the questions on page 59.

    Assignment Two

    Revise your process analysis draft for unity and coherence. Bring the new draft to class.

    2/3
    Vivid Detail
    Titles
    Capital Letters
    Bean Trees Chap. 3
    Revise your process analysis draft for support, making the details more vivid, adequate, and interesting. Bring in your revision to class.
    2/8 (Substitute Teacher)
    Capitalization
    Quotation Marks
    Titles
    English Skills pages 347-8, 353-5, 357-9.
    On looseleaf write the answers to Activity 2 and 3, pages 349-350. Then write fifteen sentences illustrating the fifteen uses of capital letters. Base each sentence on Chapter Three of The Bean Trees.
    2/10
    Comparison and Contrast
    Bean Trees Chap. 4
    In a folder, turn in your prewriting; first draft; second draft; third draft; a final typed, double-spaced version of your process analysis paper; and a list of the skills that your paper demonstrates you have mastered.
    2/15
    Comma
    Reading Comprehension
    Bean Trees Chap. 5
    Assignment One

    This homework may be written by hand or typed. Part of the homework involves copying sentences that are grammatically correct except for the punctuation. The purpose is to help improve your intuitive sense of grammar and phrasing as well as your ability to use commas correctly. You may also improve your spelling, vocabulary, handwriting, or typing by doing this. Write or type the thirty sentences (five for each of the six comma rules) in the activities pages 384-390, making sure you have correctly inserted the commas where needed.

    Assignment Two

    Bring in a draft of your comparison contrast paper.

    2/1
    Evaluating Writing
    Definition
    Bean Trees Chap. 6
    Turn in double-spaced answers to the following questions. Make sure each answer consists of several complete sentences, not phrases or lists. Phrases or lists will only be able to get 1/2 credit at most.
    1. What has Taylor been hiding from Mattie?
    2. What positive things happen when Taylor shares her feelings with Mattie?
    3. Why has Lou Ann been hiding her true personality, feelings, and thoughts from Taylor?
    4. What positive things happen when Lou Ann shares her feelings with Taylor?
    2/22
    Writing Workshop
    NA
    Bring in a revised draft of your comparison/contrast paper and a draft of your definition paper.
    2/24
    Guatemala
    Library and Research Skills
    Bean Trees Chap. 7
    NA
    2/29
    Symbolism and Theme in Fiction
    Bean Trees Chap. 8
    In a folder, turn in your prewriting; drafts; final typed, double-spaced versions of your comparison/contrast paper and definition paper; and a list of the skills that your two papers demonstrate you have mastered.
    3/2
    Honors Program Guest Speaker
    Human Rights Violations
    Argument
    Bean Trees Chap. 9

    English Skills pages 17-18

    Write a journal entry, trying to answer the question, "Should or should not the US pay monetary reparation to the victims or their surviving relatives of the Guatemalan civil war? This journal entry should be a minimum of one page in length.
    3/7
    Cause and Effect
    Bean Trees Chap. 10
    Turn in double-spaced answers to the following questions. Make sure each answer consists of several complete sentences, not phrases or lists. Phrases or lists will only be able to get 1/2 credit at most.
    1. What are three positive changes we see in Lou Ann?
    2. What are three positive changes we see in Turtle?
    3. What is the effect of Lou Ann and Turtle learning about Edna's health?
    4. Should Lou Ann "get pissed off"? What good or bad effects could result from her getting angry at sexist conditions in the world?
    3/9
    The Value of Reading
    The Value of Anxiety
    English Skills pages 523-9, 534-7

    Assignment One

    On looseleaf, write the letters of the correct answers of the reading comprehension questions pages 529-31; full sentence-length answers to the four content questions, page 531; and phrase answers to the two structure questions, pages 531. Write a two to five-sentence answer to the style and tone questions on page 532.

    Assignment Two

    On looseleaf, write the letters of the correct answers of the reading comprehension questions pages 537-8; full sentence-length answers to the two content questions, page 538; and phrase answers to the two structure questions, pages 538-9. Write a two to five-sentence answer to the style and tone questions on page 539.

    3/14-16
    Spring Break
    NA
    NA
    3/21
    Discussion of the Novel
    Bean Trees Chap. 11
    Chap. 12
    Chap. 13
    Chap. 14
    Turn in four journal entries on each of the four chapters, 11-14. Each entry should be about 100 to 200 words.
    3/23
    Discussion of the Novel
    Bean Trees Chap. 15
    Chap. 16
    Chap. 17
    Write a long journal entry on the end of the novel and your reaction to it. This entry should be between 300 and 500 words long.
    3/28
    Essay Writing Workshop
    English Skills pages 219-238
    On looseleaf answer (in phrases) questions 1 to 10 pages 228-9.
    3/30
    Essay Writing Workshop
    NA
    Bring a prewrite and outline OR a draft of your essay.
    4/4
    Effective Word Choice
    Other Punctuation
    Essay Writing
    English Skills pages 429-434

    Assignment One

    On looseleaf, do the activites, pages 430-5. Be sure to rewrite each of the fourteen sentences completely. You do not have to do the review test on page 435.

    Assignment Two

    Bring a revised draft of your essay.

    4/6
    Sentence Variety
    English Skills pages 437-44
    On looseleaf write ten complete sentences that are answers for the activities on pages 438 and 440.
    4/11
    Sentence Variety
    NA
    On looseleaf turn in Review test 1 and 2 pages 444-6. The fourteen sentences of Review Test 2 may be on any topic, but it would be helpful for your essay writing to try using sentences from your essay or on your essay topic. (Bring your essay to class as well.)
    4/13
    No Class
    NA
    NA
    4/18
    Apostrophe
    English Skills pages 365-373

    Assignment One

    On looseleaf do the four activities on pages 366-9.

    Assignment Two

    In a folder, turn in your prewriting; drafts; a final typed, double-spaced version of your essay; and a list of the skills that your paper demonstrates you have mastered.

    4/20
    Fragments
    English Skills pages 252-267
    Turn in the paragraph assigned in Review Test 2, page 373.
    4/25
    Grammar
    TBA
    TBA
    4/27
    Grammar
    TBA
    TBA
    5/2
    Editing Tests
    English Skills pages 455-458
    On looseleaf, do editing tests 1-3 pages 456-458.
    5/4
    Editing Tests
    NA
    TBA
    5/9
    What Have We Learned?
    Review of Novel
    NA
    NA
    5/11
    Exam Preparation
    NA
    NA
    5/16
    Final Exam
    VSS, 11 a.m. to 1:15
    NA
    NA

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